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Gary Holtzman's avatar

I agree with you entirely when it comes to writing. I will often hear colleagues I respect and esteemed presenters point out that forms like the 5 paragraph essay, for example, or other "antiquated" formats are artificial and constraining. Or that students should come up with their thesis and then do the research, instead of researching the subject before drawing conclusions, so as to validate their own lived experience. Well, yes, of course the 5 paragraph essay is artificial and constraining. That's called scaffolding. That's why most people learn to ride a tricycle or a bicycle with training wheels before they can jump on a mountain bike and hit the trails.

As a history teacher I often encounter students stating things without any evidence except their own feelings. Now, I am known for my class discussions and try very hard to allow all students to feel heard, but that is different from treating their uninformed feelings on Imperialism or the Industrial Revolution or Nazi Germany or Globalization as equal to that of primary sources and scholars who have devoted years of research to the subject. I am sometimes astounded when I am told to have students answer questions about history that I do not feel qualified to answer because I only have two Master's degrees and would need a Ph.D. - or at least several months of in-depth research - myself. Yet a 15 year old on the basis of two or three class meetings and maybe a short reading or two is being told that they are qualified to answer fantastically complex analysis questions, not in the dissertation or journal article that would be required, but in a paragraph or a short essay or an infographic.

It is not demeaning to say to someone, "You are not yet an expert writer or an expert on 20th Century geopolitics, but I believe you can be someday, so in this class I am going to help you build the skills that you will continue to build through the rest of your academic career, whether it ends when you graduate high school in two years or college in six or go on to be a world renowned author or scholar in any field."

There are many versions of this quote attributed to many famous people (usually men), but one version I like is attributed to Picasso: “Know the rules like a pro so you can break them like an artist.” Picasso was apparently an excellent draftsman who could draw realistically as well as anyone ever could. Nothing wrong with telling a kid you believe they can write like Picasso painted, but, like Picasso at 15 or 16, they need to master the basics first. Otherwise, they'll never advance.

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Adam's avatar

Love it, total nit, imo separating the final paragraph into two would be even more powerful, with the final paragraph starting "A student with highly educated"... in part because skimmers check the last para.

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